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my second wall... ringo & ikki centered... this actually is very different from what i orginially planned to do, i was practicing my vectoring and what not & i got snagged so i kinda gave up, haha, and i was just looking for simple line art tutorials and i stumbled across this and i tried it & i liked how it came out. i tried to clean up the scan a little bit, and i changed the texture by making it grayscale and giving it a grainy feel. i'm pretty happy with it overall. i used refrences to the manga (the bird & such) and gave it a semi romantic feel? please critique, i might be rushing too fast into making walls.. but your input definitely helps me out tons! (:

scan: AlexCorp @ animepaper.net
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font: dafont.com